Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
I saw Dalya by the showers her hair was wet and she looked like a drowned rat her tight jeans seemed tighter the white tee shirt clung to her bringing out the best of her and she was smoking looking at the grass what's up? I said woman problem she said woman problem? I said you know the flow she said   o I see I said you want to go into Oslo and have a beer and see the sights have a meal? she looked at me and inhaled deeply she was silent for a few minutes then exhaled the smoke and said ok if you like better than lying in the tent moodily gazing the canvas listening to the camp-site loudspeakers blasting out Led Zeppelin or such good what time? I said give me an hour to sort myself out and I’ll meet you by the bar she said and remember no *** tonight I nodded and she went off towards her tent and I walked into the shower room to refresh myself sad about no *** but that was it that's how things go **** the flow.
0
Jan 28, 2016
Jan 28, 2016 at 3:37 PM UTC
**** THE FLOW 1974.
I saw Dalya by the showers her hair was wet and she looked like a drowned rat her tight jeans seemed tighter the white tee shirt clung to her bringing out the best of her and she was smoking looking at the grass what's up? I said woman problem she said woman problem? I said you know the flow she said   o I see I said you want to go into Oslo and have a beer and see the sights have a meal? she looked at me and inhaled deeply she was silent for a few minutes then exhaled the smoke and said ok if you like better than lying in the tent moodily gazing the canvas listening to the camp-site loudspeakers blasting out Led Zeppelin or such good what time? I said give me an hour to sort myself out and I’ll meet you by the bar she said and remember no *** tonight I nodded and she went off towards her tent and I walked into the shower room to refresh myself sad about no *** but that was it that's how things go **** the flow.
A BOY AND GIRL IN NORWAY AT A CAMPSITE IN 1974.
TerryCollett
Written by
Jan 28, 2016
Jan 28, 2016 at 3:37 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem