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Warning: This song is based on abuse so sensetive readers should avoid it. Go ahead and take me.. Take my bones. Shatter me till you won't know, the bruises on my face hurts. Take that hand and slap my face, it's just like a gentle wake. I'm an expert at your abuse. So go ahead and take me.. Take that fist and make the wall... into an empty hole. Take those legs and kick me to the floor. Go ahead because you'll never change. The scars on my face won't go.. Even if I wash it, woahh. The hole can't be fixed even if you cement it. My body aches. I JUST WANNA ESCAPE. So go ahead and hurt me more. Why you'd stop, slap me more. Take that acid, pour it till my skin will burn. Take that knife and stab my soul. If I cry, you'll hurt me more. So go ahead and hurt me more, Take those chains on my neck and choke me whole. Take those cuffs around my wrist, and hold me in your control. Hurt me.. if it'll means you won't be near me anymore.. Far away from you and your fu**king abuse. So go ahead and hurt me more. Take away that key and lock the door. Till you forget to let me out. Take that gun and shoot my heart. My heart wasn't beating from the start. So I'll live in another world- Heaven or Hell, it's better than Earth. Now, I see you in jail. I see those cuffs attached to your hands. But somehow the faces twist. I see myself under your control. The calm emotion I held before and the victory feels hollow.
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May 22
May 22, 2026 at 5:31 AM UTC
Fictional Song- Take Me
Warning: This song is based on abuse so sensetive readers should avoid it. Go ahead and take me.. Take my bones. Shatter me till you won't know, the bruises on my face hurts. Take that hand and slap my face, it's just like a gentle wake. I'm an expert at your abuse. So go ahead and take me.. Take that fist and make the wall... into an empty hole. Take those legs and kick me to the floor. Go ahead because you'll never change. The scars on my face won't go.. Even if I wash it, woahh. The hole can't be fixed even if you cement it. My body aches. I JUST WANNA ESCAPE. So go ahead and hurt me more. Why you'd stop, slap me more. Take that acid, pour it till my skin will burn. Take that knife and stab my soul. If I cry, you'll hurt me more. So go ahead and hurt me more, Take those chains on my neck and choke me whole. Take those cuffs around my wrist, and hold me in your control. Hurt me.. if it'll means you won't be near me anymore.. Far away from you and your fu**king abuse. So go ahead and hurt me more. Take away that key and lock the door. Till you forget to let me out. Take that gun and shoot my heart. My heart wasn't beating from the start. So I'll live in another world- Heaven or Hell, it's better than Earth. Now, I see you in jail. I see those cuffs attached to your hands. But somehow the faces twist. I see myself under your control. The calm emotion I held before and the victory feels hollow.
I haven't experienced this so it's just fictional. It's also my first time writing.
Melody_
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May 22
May 22, 2026 at 5:31 AM UTC
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