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eyes were bloodshot nose was bleeding blue mouth was torn and throat was dry but slit clean we looked yonder saw creatures that didn't belong but our shoulders shrugged our knees loosened and we forever lost our words i never listened to the sounds from over there but i should've but i should've
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Dec 1, 2014
Dec 1, 2014 at 1:17 AM UTC
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eyes were bloodshot nose was bleeding blue mouth was torn and throat was dry but slit clean we looked yonder saw creatures that didn't belong but our shoulders shrugged our knees loosened and we forever lost our words i never listened to the sounds from over there but i should've but i should've
um, not really good at this "poetry" thing yet. just practicing here for literary magazine club at school. any criticism? please comment below.
ellie-fields
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Dec 1, 2014 at 1:17 AM UTC
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