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We are much too young To worry this much About life All that we have to offer We carry around In a suitcase The size of a plum Yet we worry We will never be Good enough For them The Gods who control us Puppeteers in balcony seats We are just passengers In this brief carasoul Of a lifetime
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Dec 2, 2018
Dec 2, 2018 at 4:49 PM UTC
Passengers of Life
We are much too young To worry this much About life All that we have to offer We carry around In a suitcase The size of a plum Yet we worry We will never be Good enough For them The Gods who control us Puppeteers in balcony seats We are just passengers In this brief carasoul Of a lifetime
This is a rough draft of a poem I am working on. I would love to hear some feedback so I can improve my work. Thank you lovelies xo
DayDreamer037
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22/F/Canada
Dec 2, 2018
Dec 2, 2018 at 4:49 PM UTC
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