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My light grew dim, so yours could shine bright. Unseen from the outside— The love is kept within. You care for me; You care for my light. Invisible in harmony, But you know it’s alive. I glistened by my own— My glint forced to decrease; You let my radiance release. Now we burn as one. Our lights intertwined— Inseparable and fully aligned. Dimness and light responding alike. I care for you; I care for your light. Yours, diminished by my hollow night. I need to shimmer bright to let your glow thrive. I love you like nothing else in my life— Enough to allow me the love I denied.
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May 20, 2025
May 20, 2025 at 8:15 AM UTC
Because you care (Marie's piece)
My light grew dim, so yours could shine bright. Unseen from the outside— The love is kept within. You care for me; You care for my light. Invisible in harmony, But you know it’s alive. I glistened by my own— My glint forced to decrease; You let my radiance release. Now we burn as one. Our lights intertwined— Inseparable and fully aligned. Dimness and light responding alike. I care for you; I care for your light. Yours, diminished by my hollow night. I need to shimmer bright to let your glow thrive. I love you like nothing else in my life— Enough to allow me the love I denied.
A poem written for my lovely girlfriend. The first poem I'm writing with a smile on my face.
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17/F/Bavaria, Germany
May 20, 2025
May 20, 2025 at 8:15 AM UTC
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