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The American Flag, though left unfurled, strains against its own pole, curled taut, obscured, unrecognizably meek, blown off course by the very wind it seeks. Wrapped so tight around a pole which promised to let it fly, whole and unhindered, as a sign to all, but has worked against it in this squall. The very freedom it believed to gain has shown only to be false and vain.
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Mar 13, 2013
Mar 13, 2013 at 10:26 AM UTC
The American Flag
The American Flag, though left unfurled, strains against its own pole, curled taut, obscured, unrecognizably meek, blown off course by the very wind it seeks. Wrapped so tight around a pole which promised to let it fly, whole and unhindered, as a sign to all, but has worked against it in this squall. The very freedom it believed to gain has shown only to be false and vain.
A very particular metaphor that came to mind the other day, as I saw our nation's flag struggling to flutter after being wrapped around its own pole from the wind and rain.  It was near pathetic, and brought to mind many allegories and such....
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Mar 13, 2013
Mar 13, 2013 at 10:26 AM UTC
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