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I keep losing my train of thought I really would like to find it, but sometimes I'm afraid I don't even have the ticket I lost my train of thought So I decided to go looking When I found it, it was derailed off its tracks Wrecked completely, in flaming chunks I found pieces of it hanging from a cliff Other pieces somewhere in the depths of the ocean And yet more pieces, Still on their track and chugging to their doom I lost my train of thought, maybe it's best I didn't have my ticket
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May 22, 2014
May 22, 2014 at 2:07 AM UTC
Train of Thought
I keep losing my train of thought I really would like to find it, but sometimes I'm afraid I don't even have the ticket I lost my train of thought So I decided to go looking When I found it, it was derailed off its tracks Wrecked completely, in flaming chunks I found pieces of it hanging from a cliff Other pieces somewhere in the depths of the ocean And yet more pieces, Still on their track and chugging to their doom I lost my train of thought, maybe it's best I didn't have my ticket
It's an extended metaphor
w-winchester
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May 22, 2014
May 22, 2014 at 2:07 AM UTC
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