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peace → silence Truth conveyed is truth received, as substitutions are perceived; granted by the voice or common sense, it matters not where it’s dispensed. freedom → obedience Everything is determined by institutions, their ideology the basis of all conclusions; the knee is bent when the words commit followers to the wisdom beyond their wits. care → coercion The emotional is justifiably removed, no longer needed in a world known cruel, where only the right and mighty dominate over their fellow creatures not yet awake. refinement → suffering Suffering is now the greatest purpose; no longer do comforts matter in this circus, when the inmates end up running the show, their madness agrees with repeated blows. © 2026. Lynn Green. All Rights Reserved. 20260514.
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May 15
May 15, 2026 at 4:30 PM UTC
Renaming
peace → silence Truth conveyed is truth received, as substitutions are perceived; granted by the voice or common sense, it matters not where it’s dispensed. freedom → obedience Everything is determined by institutions, their ideology the basis of all conclusions; the knee is bent when the words commit followers to the wisdom beyond their wits. care → coercion The emotional is justifiably removed, no longer needed in a world known cruel, where only the right and mighty dominate over their fellow creatures not yet awake. refinement → suffering Suffering is now the greatest purpose; no longer do comforts matter in this circus, when the inmates end up running the show, their madness agrees with repeated blows. © 2026. Lynn Green. All Rights Reserved. 20260514.
The poem "Renaming" examines how authority disguises silence, obedience, coercion, and suffering beneath virtuous language until oppression is accepted as truth.
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60/F/Pickens SC
May 15
May 15, 2026 at 4:30 PM UTC
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