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In the lines of your hands I saw the traces of brown sediment And cool earth Embedded among the folds In the rush of your laugh I heard the croak of time The crackle of years of inhaled fumes The whisper of your smile In your eyes I felt the piercing gaze The blistering attempts The impossible struggle I felt all of it And as you lay there now I think of that gaze And wish to feel it again
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May 11, 2011
May 11, 2011 at 5:47 AM UTC
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In the lines of your hands I saw the traces of brown sediment And cool earth Embedded among the folds In the rush of your laugh I heard the croak of time The crackle of years of inhaled fumes The whisper of your smile In your eyes I felt the piercing gaze The blistering attempts The impossible struggle I felt all of it And as you lay there now I think of that gaze And wish to feel it again
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May 11, 2011
May 11, 2011 at 5:47 AM UTC
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