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Such primitive creatures. Frail bodies, weak. Controlled by basic instincts, needs, wants, desires. To achieve what? A status? How routinely disturbing. Can we not find higher purposes? Not meaning finding God, a god, religion to suffocate within. Seems we are all running on a low level of being. Bright shiny objects; what, wait, it sparkles. We can look past, look into, look through these. A higher purpose to being there must be. Where is it? Our purpose? What is our purpose? Refuse to believe the chief accomplishment is reproduction. Despite what the mighty Bible states. Reproducing a species, a race that has no idea, A bad idea. Watch all busily running about. Jumping over each other and into each other. An image of crazed monkeys fills in. Shamefully those with some understanding are rarely heard or are shunned. Heaven forbid another to think outside the proverbial box. Unfortunate most of us will succumb to death without realizing there is an outside. For those who do see it; Wash those hands vigorously after you're done playing around. There is more to being human. It isn't hidden. It isn't hard to obtain. Look, open those eyes. Listen with those ears. Touch the differences. It will smell clean, I assure you. There is more to us than a slightly more intelligent Neanderthal. I see it. Do you see it?
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Jul 14, 2013
Jul 14, 2013 at 9:56 PM UTC
Do you see it?
Such primitive creatures. Frail bodies, weak. Controlled by basic instincts, needs, wants, desires. To achieve what? A status? How routinely disturbing. Can we not find higher purposes? Not meaning finding God, a god, religion to suffocate within. Seems we are all running on a low level of being. Bright shiny objects; what, wait, it sparkles. We can look past, look into, look through these. A higher purpose to being there must be. Where is it? Our purpose? What is our purpose? Refuse to believe the chief accomplishment is reproduction. Despite what the mighty Bible states. Reproducing a species, a race that has no idea, A bad idea. Watch all busily running about. Jumping over each other and into each other. An image of crazed monkeys fills in. Shamefully those with some understanding are rarely heard or are shunned. Heaven forbid another to think outside the proverbial box. Unfortunate most of us will succumb to death without realizing there is an outside. For those who do see it; Wash those hands vigorously after you're done playing around. There is more to being human. It isn't hidden. It isn't hard to obtain. Look, open those eyes. Listen with those ears. Touch the differences. It will smell clean, I assure you. There is more to us than a slightly more intelligent Neanderthal. I see it. Do you see it?
creighton-isiris-frost
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Jul 14, 2013
Jul 14, 2013 at 9:56 PM UTC
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