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You offered me some of your constructive criticism. I know it came from the heart, but you told me, “I know it’s your art, but you should make it more relatable.” That’s the thing you see? It’s my art. My art that I live and breathe. I’m freeing me from what I used to be.
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Jul 7, 2019
Jul 7, 2019 at 5:52 PM UTC
Constructive Criticism
You offered me some of your constructive criticism. I know it came from the heart, but you told me, “I know it’s your art, but you should make it more relatable.” That’s the thing you see? It’s my art. My art that I live and breathe. I’m freeing me from what I used to be.
Halfwitpoet
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28/F/Germany
Jul 7, 2019
Jul 7, 2019 at 5:52 PM UTC
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