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You said that you loved me Then where did you  go? I'm sitting here wondering Just how would I know. We loved and we laughed And we both wanted more I finished my shower. While you walked out the door I paid all your bills And climbed all your hills So baby won't you tell me What I did so **** wrong Maybe that's the real problem But it wasn't for me. Maybe all you really wanted Was just to be free. Copyright © 2019 by Zane Safrit. All rights reserved.
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Apr 18, 2020
Apr 18, 2020 at 12:49 PM UTC
Where'd You Go?
You said that you loved me Then where did you  go? I'm sitting here wondering Just how would I know. We loved and we laughed And we both wanted more I finished my shower. While you walked out the door I paid all your bills And climbed all your hills So baby won't you tell me What I did so **** wrong Maybe that's the real problem But it wasn't for me. Maybe all you really wanted Was just to be free. Copyright © 2019 by Zane Safrit. All rights reserved.
The rhythm of this song came from John Prine's "Paradise." Stay safe, stay strong, keep living with fire and passion... in closed quarters for now.
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Apr 18, 2020
Apr 18, 2020 at 12:49 PM UTC
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