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Sky Afire It started as a tendril snaked And quickly caught my eye That beckoned me to come partake The bright majestic sky From turquoise into indigo And all the shades between With molten lava spreading slow As far as could be seen With orange and corals juxtaposed Against the deeper blues And silhouetted trees in pose Amid the great bamboos The clouds were piled in tumbling flow And darkened as they fell To charcoal black, blood red aglow At meeting with the swell And as the skyflow met the sea And seemed to melt within The sea took on its vibrancy And flow began again And as the skyflood reached its peak Engulfing and aflame It seemed directly to retreat As quickly as it came The ashen grey began above And slowly spread below Till all was left in pumice drifts Within its final glow And now the show has ended With the sky once more a sky And the clouds and sea appended For a witness such as I 3 Oct 2000
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Jun 18, 2015
Jun 18, 2015 at 4:06 PM UTC
Sky Afire
Sky Afire It started as a tendril snaked And quickly caught my eye That beckoned me to come partake The bright majestic sky From turquoise into indigo And all the shades between With molten lava spreading slow As far as could be seen With orange and corals juxtaposed Against the deeper blues And silhouetted trees in pose Amid the great bamboos The clouds were piled in tumbling flow And darkened as they fell To charcoal black, blood red aglow At meeting with the swell And as the skyflow met the sea And seemed to melt within The sea took on its vibrancy And flow began again And as the skyflood reached its peak Engulfing and aflame It seemed directly to retreat As quickly as it came The ashen grey began above And slowly spread below Till all was left in pumice drifts Within its final glow And now the show has ended With the sky once more a sky And the clouds and sea appended For a witness such as I 3 Oct 2000
Quite simply, a poem about one of the most gorgeous and amazing sunsets I was privileged to witness.  I have read this in public and this is the first time it appears in print.
cori-macnaughton
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Jun 18, 2015
Jun 18, 2015 at 4:06 PM UTC
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