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Your self-righteous really bothers me to the very core of my sinful soul which you don't seem to realize at all because you’re so consumed by your own ego I wish you had done some self-evaluation because you don't speak for all thinking that you do being so defensive for others when many or all are not offended we don't need your "saving" but if it makes you feel better especially about your past then just do what is right especially when no one is watching because we all know the truth you have difficulty doing so your history shows it your culture your people and lies your narcissism really bothers me regardless of what side you belong because you don't seem to understand that humility and shame goes a long way.
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Oct 22, 2023
Oct 22, 2023 at 9:39 PM UTC
Hello, (pronoun) altruistic
Your self-righteous really bothers me to the very core of my sinful soul which you don't seem to realize at all because you’re so consumed by your own ego I wish you had done some self-evaluation because you don't speak for all thinking that you do being so defensive for others when many or all are not offended we don't need your "saving" but if it makes you feel better especially about your past then just do what is right especially when no one is watching because we all know the truth you have difficulty doing so your history shows it your culture your people and lies your narcissism really bothers me regardless of what side you belong because you don't seem to understand that humility and shame goes a long way.
Still in the works. Critiques are welcome as always.
samog
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Oct 22, 2023
Oct 22, 2023 at 9:39 PM UTC
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