Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
Staying still I try to drain Every last Little drop. Tilting back, I Grip the neck but Don't break it, God forbid I'm in no shape to clean up a mess Though I'm an expert at making them, I tell you what, I hate the television, all those shiny happy people like in that song I don't know the words to, but it's obviously true, watching these shiny happy lives with all of these beautiful people who are probably ugly on the inside, just like me, going home to sit in their expensive new recliners and grip the neck but don't break it, don't make a mess that you can't clean up drain every last drop even if you don't really want it, 'cause it used to make you feel much better, and now it's just routine, like brushing your teeth and trying to sleep and telling old friends that you're fine, fine, just tired, so very tired and I'm trying to stare through the television to see these stupid phonies at home in their own chairs, drinking from a bottle like this one as if it might save their sorry lives, like I'm trying to do right now, tilting it back for just one more drop, ****** there is no more and I'm not done drinking but the neck is slipping from my hands and I'm trying to drink it down, **** it up when I let go of the neck and drop it and there is a mess for me to clean up, I tell you what, all that broken glass and those elusive little drops that could've made everything so much better, could've fixed me but oh well, guess I can't watch TV anymore, 'cause I've got a mess to try to clean up right now, yes siree, guess that even the shiny happy people have to **** it up and fix it every now and then just like me and you and everyone else.
0
Aug 17, 2018
Aug 17, 2018 at 1:22 PM UTC
**** it up and fix it.
Staying still I try to drain Every last Little drop. Tilting back, I Grip the neck but Don't break it, God forbid I'm in no shape to clean up a mess Though I'm an expert at making them, I tell you what, I hate the television, all those shiny happy people like in that song I don't know the words to, but it's obviously true, watching these shiny happy lives with all of these beautiful people who are probably ugly on the inside, just like me, going home to sit in their expensive new recliners and grip the neck but don't break it, don't make a mess that you can't clean up drain every last drop even if you don't really want it, 'cause it used to make you feel much better, and now it's just routine, like brushing your teeth and trying to sleep and telling old friends that you're fine, fine, just tired, so very tired and I'm trying to stare through the television to see these stupid phonies at home in their own chairs, drinking from a bottle like this one as if it might save their sorry lives, like I'm trying to do right now, tilting it back for just one more drop, ****** there is no more and I'm not done drinking but the neck is slipping from my hands and I'm trying to drink it down, **** it up when I let go of the neck and drop it and there is a mess for me to clean up, I tell you what, all that broken glass and those elusive little drops that could've made everything so much better, could've fixed me but oh well, guess I can't watch TV anymore, 'cause I've got a mess to try to clean up right now, yes siree, guess that even the shiny happy people have to **** it up and fix it every now and then just like me and you and everyone else.
My first attempt at shape poetry. Probably messed up a bit, but oh well.
Madison21
Written by
Aug 17, 2018
Aug 17, 2018 at 1:22 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem