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Emptiness, Darkness, No peace. Silent, Still. Nothingness. No light, No sound, No shape, Nothing. No fear; No joy. Somehow; somewhere deep within, There is a semblance of a feeling, A feeling that I Am. Then movement, shadows, confusion; Fear arrives. More awareness of emotions and feelings. Lights, colors, sounds, touching. Shapes come into focus. I begin to come into focus… To understand that I am. Who I am, Where I am. I am coherent now.
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May 13, 2019
May 13, 2019 at 7:16 PM UTC
I Went Nowhere
Emptiness, Darkness, No peace. Silent, Still. Nothingness. No light, No sound, No shape, Nothing. No fear; No joy. Somehow; somewhere deep within, There is a semblance of a feeling, A feeling that I Am. Then movement, shadows, confusion; Fear arrives. More awareness of emotions and feelings. Lights, colors, sounds, touching. Shapes come into focus. I begin to come into focus… To understand that I am. Who I am, Where I am. I am coherent now.
awakening from the coma that followed.
LadonnaAtherley
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May 13, 2019
May 13, 2019 at 7:16 PM UTC
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