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The watchful gaze shone down, and then the blade, deep and swift… Made even gentle bloodied sunrise, too terrifying for my eyes Days in hiding came to nights where, sleep superfluous, I slept not… Until I shed that sacrificial skin, now poisoned, now unholy, now thin And seeing it no longer as my own, I marveled at its hoary creeds, barnacles… Its gruesome rust of well-intentioned lusts, turned water swift to clinging mud Now free of age, of sins partaken, a naked Adam in a sweet garden… Timeless, weightless, a sanctity of soul, natural man, new-made, now whole
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Oct 29, 2015
Oct 29, 2015 at 6:39 PM UTC
Death, Sin, and Other Trivia
The watchful gaze shone down, and then the blade, deep and swift… Made even gentle bloodied sunrise, too terrifying for my eyes Days in hiding came to nights where, sleep superfluous, I slept not… Until I shed that sacrificial skin, now poisoned, now unholy, now thin And seeing it no longer as my own, I marveled at its hoary creeds, barnacles… Its gruesome rust of well-intentioned lusts, turned water swift to clinging mud Now free of age, of sins partaken, a naked Adam in a sweet garden… Timeless, weightless, a sanctity of soul, natural man, new-made, now whole
Rivenheart
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Oct 29, 2015
Oct 29, 2015 at 6:39 PM UTC
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