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TRAPDOORS IN OUR LIFE Casually as we stroll to find a new view on that knoll, if the vision is blocked we won't see all the potholes Was it truly the intention to reach a holy grail, is not achieving it a sign we may be frail Many steps to take through overgrown fields with hidden paths,is about finding stepping stone not the pitfalls Fun and frolic necessary parts of the play,often casually we develop habits covering our minds like a black veil Freedom was much easier without the knowledge of blind spots, how the breezes easily turn into windstorms How often have we overcome what could have been a block but when simply taken in stride we prevail Peering out over perpetual pastures with unknown ditches and glitches ,beauty or beast to greet us as we crisscross Unheard disclaimers were given for protection brushed aside nothing to break our stride blind to being frail Once again to face a day never considering a loss, just a need to play,often staying in motion comes with a higher cost Knowledge of others ahead keeps us from our bed,playing on our own path to find new pleasure,unknown fears would make us stale Will we take lessons from past discretion's or become feeble as we fall remain strong because this life testing can only be lived not taught. R.C.
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Jul 5, 2018
Jul 5, 2018 at 7:12 AM UTC
TRAPDOORS IN OUR LIFE
TRAPDOORS IN OUR LIFE Casually as we stroll to find a new view on that knoll, if the vision is blocked we won't see all the potholes Was it truly the intention to reach a holy grail, is not achieving it a sign we may be frail Many steps to take through overgrown fields with hidden paths,is about finding stepping stone not the pitfalls Fun and frolic necessary parts of the play,often casually we develop habits covering our minds like a black veil Freedom was much easier without the knowledge of blind spots, how the breezes easily turn into windstorms How often have we overcome what could have been a block but when simply taken in stride we prevail Peering out over perpetual pastures with unknown ditches and glitches ,beauty or beast to greet us as we crisscross Unheard disclaimers were given for protection brushed aside nothing to break our stride blind to being frail Once again to face a day never considering a loss, just a need to play,often staying in motion comes with a higher cost Knowledge of others ahead keeps us from our bed,playing on our own path to find new pleasure,unknown fears would make us stale Will we take lessons from past discretion's or become feeble as we fall remain strong because this life testing can only be lived not taught. R.C.
Funny we still manage to make it on our own path when even ourselves would give different advice about which way to travel . the scars and marks make for conversation hopefully much later. Thanks for reading your comments are helpful. Rick
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Jul 5, 2018
Jul 5, 2018 at 7:12 AM UTC
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