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Time somebody told me That I’d lost my flair That I couldn’t do it anymore Because I’d show how I feel I’d flip up my hair Complain all night Say it wasn’t fair That I’d rather be uptight Time somebody told me That my behavior needed to change That I’d never make it out there That I needed a target for which to aim Though all my arrows landed far off the range If only I’d listened This world can be so strange If only I’d payed attention to the stars when they glistened Time somebody told me Doors don’t permanently close If I just reach for the handle Maybe I’ll see As the door creaks open Maybe I’ll finally realize There’s never ending opportunity
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May 23
May 23, 2026 at 9:53 AM UTC
Time somebody told me
Time somebody told me That I’d lost my flair That I couldn’t do it anymore Because I’d show how I feel I’d flip up my hair Complain all night Say it wasn’t fair That I’d rather be uptight Time somebody told me That my behavior needed to change That I’d never make it out there That I needed a target for which to aim Though all my arrows landed far off the range If only I’d listened This world can be so strange If only I’d payed attention to the stars when they glistened Time somebody told me Doors don’t permanently close If I just reach for the handle Maybe I’ll see As the door creaks open Maybe I’ll finally realize There’s never ending opportunity
This is an old poem I wrote for a school magazine. I'm saving it here before I lose the account it's on, and because I can't find said magazine anymore. (I've left it unchanged, spelling mistakes and all, though it was originally in the font waiting for the sunrise.)
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May 23
May 23, 2026 at 9:53 AM UTC
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