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Left and right I was surronded, I couldn't breath, The air that managed to fill my longs, Was opaque with dust and clouded, I felt like I was falling, And there was no wings to catch the wind, And pull me up to soar, I thought this fatal fall was something made up, A myth to scare the kids, But right now though I was planted to the ground, I was falling, With no control
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Sep 5, 2012
Sep 5, 2012 at 10:06 PM UTC
Falling
Left and right I was surronded, I couldn't breath, The air that managed to fill my longs, Was opaque with dust and clouded, I felt like I was falling, And there was no wings to catch the wind, And pull me up to soar, I thought this fatal fall was something made up, A myth to scare the kids, But right now though I was planted to the ground, I was falling, With no control
katlyn-orthman
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21/F/American
Sep 5, 2012
Sep 5, 2012 at 10:06 PM UTC
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