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In her dark, crinkly map of life, drawn from shady experiences she courted in her forgettable past, hope was an island fully obliterated, not even a dot was left as a mark nothing identifiable was there, just water. Perplexed she stood, not knowing how to reclaim any of it, even if it's in depth. Then came the mysterious redeemer, uncaring about his fate; innocence was writ large on his face, she roped him in to helping her. He dived deep in to her deluged past, dredged enough, from under, gave her hope a shape and size, to make an island, that would give her life. The beauty he created for her sake was unbelievable, no monument of love would have looked so resplendent! That's where she brought her new lover over, a character as shady and vicious as her, her somersault was indeed spectacular none had witnessed such a heartless trick, till then! She forgot the past, the deluge that engulfed her hopes, the mysterious redeemer and all that.
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Oct 16, 2013
Oct 16, 2013 at 10:17 AM UTC
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In her dark, crinkly map of life, drawn from shady experiences she courted in her forgettable past, hope was an island fully obliterated, not even a dot was left as a mark nothing identifiable was there, just water. Perplexed she stood, not knowing how to reclaim any of it, even if it's in depth. Then came the mysterious redeemer, uncaring about his fate; innocence was writ large on his face, she roped him in to helping her. He dived deep in to her deluged past, dredged enough, from under, gave her hope a shape and size, to make an island, that would give her life. The beauty he created for her sake was unbelievable, no monument of love would have looked so resplendent! That's where she brought her new lover over, a character as shady and vicious as her, her somersault was indeed spectacular none had witnessed such a heartless trick, till then! She forgot the past, the deluge that engulfed her hopes, the mysterious redeemer and all that.
k-balachandran
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Oct 16, 2013
Oct 16, 2013 at 10:17 AM UTC
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