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Let's feel alive after the first cut; the bloom on your wrist, the white line on the mirror separating where you have been, and where you want to go. You laid down in a blanket of snow and rocked yourself like a river boat, turning sleep in fits and waves, to wake as a fraction of yourself. Let's feel alive at the steep passing; the sheer drop below, the winter that thawed in your mind, that first hit of love- first taste of smoke and sugared *** I became vacant at the shop-fronts and pinned myself to sleep with **** and binaural beats; the sea-wall to my mental health. Let's feel alive in our life's passing; the intersecting plot-lines, the echoes of old suffering that will dissipate as we make our way to where we want to go.
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Mar 2, 2015
Mar 2, 2015 at 3:14 PM UTC
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Let's feel alive after the first cut; the bloom on your wrist, the white line on the mirror separating where you have been, and where you want to go. You laid down in a blanket of snow and rocked yourself like a river boat, turning sleep in fits and waves, to wake as a fraction of yourself. Let's feel alive at the steep passing; the sheer drop below, the winter that thawed in your mind, that first hit of love- first taste of smoke and sugared *** I became vacant at the shop-fronts and pinned myself to sleep with **** and binaural beats; the sea-wall to my mental health. Let's feel alive in our life's passing; the intersecting plot-lines, the echoes of old suffering that will dissipate as we make our way to where we want to go.
Edward-Coles
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26/M/English
Mar 2, 2015
Mar 2, 2015 at 3:14 PM UTC
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