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the brittle sound of the room seeps slowly into my  conscious mind soft low watt bulb echo on closed eyelid leaves a bitter metallic aftertaste while an expanding cold puddle crawls unevenly out onto the hot floor from the rattling roach infested mini-fridge stark contrast of filthy green linoleum tile and what can be described as a breathing moving once red carpet that seethes with life in the dark end of the room refugees we huddle in the light awaiting the shouting and gunfire to die down long enough to seek semblance of sleep but naught to be had for love or money was only days ago we rode into this place like kings now we resemble peasants hat in hand but inside i am smiling she loves me
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Jun 22, 2013
Jun 22, 2013 at 3:53 PM UTC
kingston bay
the brittle sound of the room seeps slowly into my  conscious mind soft low watt bulb echo on closed eyelid leaves a bitter metallic aftertaste while an expanding cold puddle crawls unevenly out onto the hot floor from the rattling roach infested mini-fridge stark contrast of filthy green linoleum tile and what can be described as a breathing moving once red carpet that seethes with life in the dark end of the room refugees we huddle in the light awaiting the shouting and gunfire to die down long enough to seek semblance of sleep but naught to be had for love or money was only days ago we rode into this place like kings now we resemble peasants hat in hand but inside i am smiling she loves me
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Jun 22, 2013
Jun 22, 2013 at 3:53 PM UTC
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