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If a message braves a lonely dawn then quietly departs Filling your sky with the sweet honey of its sigh Will you let the sun set in the western plain of your heart Before you send this message your reply Should you feel the soft touch of this sigh on your brow Taste its honey at its finest on your lips Will you hear this message in your here and now Reply, before it once again, quietly slips While the world is doubting, will your longing run deep To hear this message breath a sigh of relief Or will you hold your reply inside the plain where you keep Your answer in your heart like a thief Despite every bracing measure you take to not reply This message will continue bravely on Filling your sky with the sweet honey of its sigh Until you respond to the lonely dawn
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Nov 8, 2010
Nov 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM UTC
Lonely Dawn
If a message braves a lonely dawn then quietly departs Filling your sky with the sweet honey of its sigh Will you let the sun set in the western plain of your heart Before you send this message your reply Should you feel the soft touch of this sigh on your brow Taste its honey at its finest on your lips Will you hear this message in your here and now Reply, before it once again, quietly slips While the world is doubting, will your longing run deep To hear this message breath a sigh of relief Or will you hold your reply inside the plain where you keep Your answer in your heart like a thief Despite every bracing measure you take to not reply This message will continue bravely on Filling your sky with the sweet honey of its sigh Until you respond to the lonely dawn
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Nov 8, 2010
Nov 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM UTC
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