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Till now ive been pretending

That this Life has been alright

When the burden ive carried

Hidden for years from sight

Now slowly things fall apart

Deep in my heart-a dying plight

I cant pretend no more

Hope evades my heart

And to all an end must come

Ive tried......but i have lost

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M / South African
Published
Dec 27, 2025
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