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Had you asked 2 young adults what marriage was They'd laugh, and assume its some forever where doubt would perish Thus giving way to birth, legacy and forever In the sky where they can be together But what if you gave them each a glimpse to each others future Where they couldn't tell the other what they saw, make it torture Where they dance knowing where it ends Not for themselves, but where the other bends What if here with me was an expression Where no sea or plane, but 3 hours Divides this 2 individuals , test their dedication Where they have no power A parley, meeting, a chance at reconciling But the other party is fighting to defend Errors they surely know they have Forcing the other back to their cave This poem has no melody, yet this story was filled with it taking 4 years as one would bring material, the other builds Those 3 hours away, meant nothing when points met The author awestruck, without a tongue to confess The other so excited, yet weary not to make a mess Of a story yet to be told, yet already in the making A record of once these soulmates had seen the other Saying to each other excuses of sister and brother Can one use cement, to fix cracks in a glass house? Where everyone could see brother playing cat and mouse? Would a sibling learn to care so much they'd die for the other? Would a lover think the friend zoning wasn't worth the bother? Somewhere out there they always came to know eventually love gave a massive blow Valentine's day suddenly had meaning, promised hugs and meetings become binding contracts For when these siblings would eventually come to make contact Funny how the end of the tale wasn't left in tact Long distance is a blunder, but like the song it can be great To know another through that connection of imagination and past tense Testing fate yet always coming to see That you never truly came to need me It was I, who wanted you to be you. To be here, with me.
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Feb 27, 2025
Feb 27, 2025 at 6:24 PM UTC
Here with me
Had you asked 2 young adults what marriage was They'd laugh, and assume its some forever where doubt would perish Thus giving way to birth, legacy and forever In the sky where they can be together But what if you gave them each a glimpse to each others future Where they couldn't tell the other what they saw, make it torture Where they dance knowing where it ends Not for themselves, but where the other bends What if here with me was an expression Where no sea or plane, but 3 hours Divides this 2 individuals , test their dedication Where they have no power A parley, meeting, a chance at reconciling But the other party is fighting to defend Errors they surely know they have Forcing the other back to their cave This poem has no melody, yet this story was filled with it taking 4 years as one would bring material, the other builds Those 3 hours away, meant nothing when points met The author awestruck, without a tongue to confess The other so excited, yet weary not to make a mess Of a story yet to be told, yet already in the making A record of once these soulmates had seen the other Saying to each other excuses of sister and brother Can one use cement, to fix cracks in a glass house? Where everyone could see brother playing cat and mouse? Would a sibling learn to care so much they'd die for the other? Would a lover think the friend zoning wasn't worth the bother? Somewhere out there they always came to know eventually love gave a massive blow Valentine's day suddenly had meaning, promised hugs and meetings become binding contracts For when these siblings would eventually come to make contact Funny how the end of the tale wasn't left in tact Long distance is a blunder, but like the song it can be great To know another through that connection of imagination and past tense Testing fate yet always coming to see That you never truly came to need me It was I, who wanted you to be you. To be here, with me.
Looking back at this poem its one of the times I felt the need to rhyme to make it sound like the song based on it. I hope she made it well in life and she found Christ as I hope all the same for you all. Thank you for reading.
thyreez
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23/M/South Africa
Feb 27, 2025
Feb 27, 2025 at 6:24 PM UTC
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