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Time, oh time is a silly thing, it proves things right and it proves them wrong. Its’ seemingly long years change you and all that can be touched. Time- this illusion we base our lives around, this illusion we obsess over (don’t deny it, we all do). It confines us to a routine, to a norm. The time spent at desks makes us into zombies. The time spent after chokes us with copious amounts of papers and projects. But occasionally it grants us a wondrous thing called wisdom. It bestows upon us insight and growth. My always shrewd teenage self has grown to believe that time… can go **** itself. I want to fall into a slumber that is a day or two long, catch up on rest and miss the trials of everyday life. Of course, once several days pass or several thousand ticks of a clock, I’ll crave another respite. Life. Life is hard. It’s tiring. And somehow there is never enough time to work, work on the work, rework the work, eat, sleep, take a couple deep breathes to keep from jamming a stapler into any eyeballs, be a healthy person, and do all the things that society tells you to do. Maybe a designated sleep day would be nice. If we only need 8 hours of peaceful slumber for every 16 hours of traumatizing wakefulness, then sleeping for 24 hours would give us 48 hours of working. Right? No. But it’s a proportion, so theoretically it should make sense. Which leads me to conclude that 8 hours is not merely enough time to rest. Unless you’re under the age of 6. Or you’re retired. Or in a coma. Or… But no. No, no, no, no, no. We must keep going. Like good little soldiers on and on for 60 years, 70 years, 80 years? I’m sorry but that just does not appeal to me. Why oh why would I want to work my body to unhealthy levels. Why oh why would I want to exhaust my mind to points of breakdowns nearly every day. It’s silly to want to have enough time to eat healthily. And hit the gym 3 or 4 times a week. And sleep until recharged. Yes that’s preposterous. Ridiculous. Time is an illusion that is ruining lives. If we have an illusion destroying us from the inside out, does that make us crazy?
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Nov 11, 2013
Nov 11, 2013 at 5:58 PM UTC
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Time, oh time is a silly thing, it proves things right and it proves them wrong. Its’ seemingly long years change you and all that can be touched. Time- this illusion we base our lives around, this illusion we obsess over (don’t deny it, we all do). It confines us to a routine, to a norm. The time spent at desks makes us into zombies. The time spent after chokes us with copious amounts of papers and projects. But occasionally it grants us a wondrous thing called wisdom. It bestows upon us insight and growth. My always shrewd teenage self has grown to believe that time… can go **** itself. I want to fall into a slumber that is a day or two long, catch up on rest and miss the trials of everyday life. Of course, once several days pass or several thousand ticks of a clock, I’ll crave another respite. Life. Life is hard. It’s tiring. And somehow there is never enough time to work, work on the work, rework the work, eat, sleep, take a couple deep breathes to keep from jamming a stapler into any eyeballs, be a healthy person, and do all the things that society tells you to do. Maybe a designated sleep day would be nice. If we only need 8 hours of peaceful slumber for every 16 hours of traumatizing wakefulness, then sleeping for 24 hours would give us 48 hours of working. Right? No. But it’s a proportion, so theoretically it should make sense. Which leads me to conclude that 8 hours is not merely enough time to rest. Unless you’re under the age of 6. Or you’re retired. Or in a coma. Or… But no. No, no, no, no, no. We must keep going. Like good little soldiers on and on for 60 years, 70 years, 80 years? I’m sorry but that just does not appeal to me. Why oh why would I want to work my body to unhealthy levels. Why oh why would I want to exhaust my mind to points of breakdowns nearly every day. It’s silly to want to have enough time to eat healthily. And hit the gym 3 or 4 times a week. And sleep until recharged. Yes that’s preposterous. Ridiculous. Time is an illusion that is ruining lives. If we have an illusion destroying us from the inside out, does that make us crazy?
This is really just me complaining about the overburdening us school kids deal with.
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Nov 11, 2013
Nov 11, 2013 at 5:58 PM UTC
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