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The day I realised the extraordinary Power of the Universe I began to take refuge in letting go. First it was my possessions: I took no pleasure in personal property Felt lighter free from attachment. Then it was my body: I wanted nothing, but to share the little I had. I esteemed each new person higher Than the last and easily above myself. Each event good or bad, Was a gift so great because I did not conceive it. And when I did, I denied all liability. Is this life just of the Universe Or do I have a piece of power? If each presence is a present to me, How could I return the favour While I'm busy falling into the flow of life? Living through a series of passive actions Can wear on your mind. You become a shell. Full of other people's opinions, actions.... Then stiff like a marionette, Always performing for others pleasure Saying only what they want to hear. And when you realise these leers Are as hollow as your actions, You become heavy and possessive. I saw my reflection and realised I'd achieved the very opposite of my aim. When I lost control I lost myself. There was nothing new I'd gained.
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Jul 27, 2020
Jul 27, 2020 at 10:48 AM UTC
The Illusion of Control Pt.1
The day I realised the extraordinary Power of the Universe I began to take refuge in letting go. First it was my possessions: I took no pleasure in personal property Felt lighter free from attachment. Then it was my body: I wanted nothing, but to share the little I had. I esteemed each new person higher Than the last and easily above myself. Each event good or bad, Was a gift so great because I did not conceive it. And when I did, I denied all liability. Is this life just of the Universe Or do I have a piece of power? If each presence is a present to me, How could I return the favour While I'm busy falling into the flow of life? Living through a series of passive actions Can wear on your mind. You become a shell. Full of other people's opinions, actions.... Then stiff like a marionette, Always performing for others pleasure Saying only what they want to hear. And when you realise these leers Are as hollow as your actions, You become heavy and possessive. I saw my reflection and realised I'd achieved the very opposite of my aim. When I lost control I lost myself. There was nothing new I'd gained.
self-control reflections puppet feelings
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Jul 27, 2020
Jul 27, 2020 at 10:48 AM UTC
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