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You’re waiting for a train A train that takes you far away But then you remember You already played  this game Inception is what they mean For they who can’t dream Forever is what you get As long as you have left Buildings fall ocean rising Forever might seem surprising Untouchable it seems But promises are to keep You think you are awake While you are actually asleep Wanting to wake up You have to die Totems are the key To see what is reality Gravity rules For they who are awake And alive
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 5:08 PM UTC
Inception
You’re waiting for a train A train that takes you far away But then you remember You already played  this game Inception is what they mean For they who can’t dream Forever is what you get As long as you have left Buildings fall ocean rising Forever might seem surprising Untouchable it seems But promises are to keep You think you are awake While you are actually asleep Wanting to wake up You have to die Totems are the key To see what is reality Gravity rules For they who are awake And alive
I just want to say I dont know anything about Poetry unfortunately. So every time I write, I hope that it comes out alright. So i really appreciate it if you review it so I can work on my skills. Thank you for reading :)
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 5:08 PM UTC
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