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There is a concept in religious circles here (and other shapes; rectangles, rhombuses, rorschach blots freckled with faith) that the way to get closest to a person is to not touch them. So they laid in your car side by side, her elbow holding her head up like an exhibit on falling, on disbelief and you puffed up your unshaven cheeks and blew in her face. It blew her eyelashes back and they bowed their blonde-headed arms at you, They heard you tell her a bedtime story with your eyes closed and they laid down to sleep too, lacquered down with air conditioning fluid brushed wet through the desert nighttime air. At dawn, you promised you wouldn't touch her as you lit a cigarette and held it to her mouth, her lips an inch from your knuckles and she breathed you in and blew the smoke out the car window where it hung suspended like a ghost.
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Jul 16, 2011
Jul 16, 2011 at 4:42 PM UTC
shomer negiah
There is a concept in religious circles here (and other shapes; rectangles, rhombuses, rorschach blots freckled with faith) that the way to get closest to a person is to not touch them. So they laid in your car side by side, her elbow holding her head up like an exhibit on falling, on disbelief and you puffed up your unshaven cheeks and blew in her face. It blew her eyelashes back and they bowed their blonde-headed arms at you, They heard you tell her a bedtime story with your eyes closed and they laid down to sleep too, lacquered down with air conditioning fluid brushed wet through the desert nighttime air. At dawn, you promised you wouldn't touch her as you lit a cigarette and held it to her mouth, her lips an inch from your knuckles and she breathed you in and blew the smoke out the car window where it hung suspended like a ghost.
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Jul 16, 2011
Jul 16, 2011 at 4:42 PM UTC
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