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another door closed another community mourns a macabre picture on a frame for a tear stained love to find once crafted by his own hand not twelve months since now a final resting place marked by a note in steady pen and why should it take an angel of the epihany to deliver a man in a plastic bag to teach us of cbt of an emotional intelligence to be mindful of ourselves while church, state, school fails this country's young men for generations and on the silence does creep so many futures in the past too many paths closing so fast there are so many questions that sustain this male disease silence never speaks in answers or hears society's griefful pleas today in another village tommorow yet another town a young man fits an attic joist with silent eyes so cold for jesus he was a carpenter or so at least we're told
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Feb 1, 2018
Feb 1, 2018 at 11:17 AM UTC
closed doors
another door closed another community mourns a macabre picture on a frame for a tear stained love to find once crafted by his own hand not twelve months since now a final resting place marked by a note in steady pen and why should it take an angel of the epihany to deliver a man in a plastic bag to teach us of cbt of an emotional intelligence to be mindful of ourselves while church, state, school fails this country's young men for generations and on the silence does creep so many futures in the past too many paths closing so fast there are so many questions that sustain this male disease silence never speaks in answers or hears society's griefful pleas today in another village tommorow yet another town a young man fits an attic joist with silent eyes so cold for jesus he was a carpenter or so at least we're told
death by suicide continues to a nightmare visited on so many towns and villages of rural Ireland for generations and on with next to no supports of state ever prioritised to tackle this disease of predominately young men
david-noonan
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Feb 1, 2018
Feb 1, 2018 at 11:17 AM UTC
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