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My friend don't hide away Higher walls have been breached By weaker men in older day For reasons sillier in longer reach Troy was sailed for lesser reason Don't forgo this journey The value cannot cheapen Except in precepts failing worthy You never said worthless But your indifference demands the fact I've seen how you move I’ve seen how you act It doesn't have to be this way spread thin so low to the ground In an empty room dancing all day With only echoes of past sound It is your heart imitating a silence felt It is not a demand of your total worth If art was painted with absent mediums You would be an artist of infinite mirth And what an artist you are Had you eyes to see, Shut so tight they wont even blur So you mark the incur Fleeting The party went on so late Because it was waiting for you You kept clean the slate Anticipating rejection due While you hide in the room, till the guests all leave As if you're not worthy to be seen But this room was made for you The floor waits for your image gleam This room, it is not all that is left It is not the final place to dance You are not bound to this interior You need only assume the stance And face the crowd that hides in your mirror You may go as you please There is no need hide from your sight The door will open with ease The sun was shining when I walked into the night It will shine no less for you Should you just choose to reach for it with grace imbued You are the perfect part Of an imperfect work of art
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Nov 17, 2025
Nov 17, 2025 at 2:32 PM UTC
Let's become Equals
My friend don't hide away Higher walls have been breached By weaker men in older day For reasons sillier in longer reach Troy was sailed for lesser reason Don't forgo this journey The value cannot cheapen Except in precepts failing worthy You never said worthless But your indifference demands the fact I've seen how you move I’ve seen how you act It doesn't have to be this way spread thin so low to the ground In an empty room dancing all day With only echoes of past sound It is your heart imitating a silence felt It is not a demand of your total worth If art was painted with absent mediums You would be an artist of infinite mirth And what an artist you are Had you eyes to see, Shut so tight they wont even blur So you mark the incur Fleeting The party went on so late Because it was waiting for you You kept clean the slate Anticipating rejection due While you hide in the room, till the guests all leave As if you're not worthy to be seen But this room was made for you The floor waits for your image gleam This room, it is not all that is left It is not the final place to dance You are not bound to this interior You need only assume the stance And face the crowd that hides in your mirror You may go as you please There is no need hide from your sight The door will open with ease The sun was shining when I walked into the night It will shine no less for you Should you just choose to reach for it with grace imbued You are the perfect part Of an imperfect work of art
I don't know who invented Wabi-sabi, but it reminds me a lot of you
Elijah
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29/M/Louisiana
Nov 17, 2025
Nov 17, 2025 at 2:32 PM UTC
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