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It all started with mixing Tequila and Sambuca last Friday night. Then I noticed him, busting some classic moves on the dance floor. Soon we are dancing, grinding, kissing, laughing, dancing, kissing, he's even drinking out of my half finished cup of water, he's smiling. "I'm a Royal Marine, not an Army boy!" he corrects. "A Commando." We both even have the same phone! Coincidence? I don't think so. Beads of sweat dripping from his hair onto his flawless face and neck, yet, he smells oh so divine, "it's Gucci Guilty Intense", he explains. I blurt out, "Hope this won't be a waste of your time, 'cause I'm not going to sleep with you tonight!" He says, "All right", and smiles. Mixed signals, cold bed phobia, pure drunkenness combined, I offer him, "It's late. You can spend the night at mine, I don't mind." "Just Scott, you won't remember the rest, it's long and complicated", later he adds, "Good luck trying to find me without my name!" "I'm Twenty One." "That's so young", I exclaim and he frowns. He's cocky yet witty, and also very pretty, so I let my dignity drown. Taking him in my mouth until he explodes like a loaded gun, my duty to the nation's hunkiest hero was well and truly done. "I joined two days after my eighteenth birthday", said he with pride. "My vacation's over. I'm leaving on Sunday to Poole". I sighed. I spent the entire night insomniac, with my head throbbing to the beat of his obliviously, peacefuly sleeping exhaling and inhaling speed. Close enough to feel the heat of his body, yet a million miles away, him dreaming and I reminiscing, both awaiting the dawn of a new day. Skipping the "thank you", "goodbye", hug or phone number, he says, "See you around maybe", holding a rather deceitfully seductive gaze. "Scott, we're never going to see each other again", I answer bluntly. Mirroring my sad smile in reply, minus the sadness, he left promptly.
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Nov 24, 2012
Nov 24, 2012 at 3:05 PM UTC
Soldier Boy
It all started with mixing Tequila and Sambuca last Friday night. Then I noticed him, busting some classic moves on the dance floor. Soon we are dancing, grinding, kissing, laughing, dancing, kissing, he's even drinking out of my half finished cup of water, he's smiling. "I'm a Royal Marine, not an Army boy!" he corrects. "A Commando." We both even have the same phone! Coincidence? I don't think so. Beads of sweat dripping from his hair onto his flawless face and neck, yet, he smells oh so divine, "it's Gucci Guilty Intense", he explains. I blurt out, "Hope this won't be a waste of your time, 'cause I'm not going to sleep with you tonight!" He says, "All right", and smiles. Mixed signals, cold bed phobia, pure drunkenness combined, I offer him, "It's late. You can spend the night at mine, I don't mind." "Just Scott, you won't remember the rest, it's long and complicated", later he adds, "Good luck trying to find me without my name!" "I'm Twenty One." "That's so young", I exclaim and he frowns. He's cocky yet witty, and also very pretty, so I let my dignity drown. Taking him in my mouth until he explodes like a loaded gun, my duty to the nation's hunkiest hero was well and truly done. "I joined two days after my eighteenth birthday", said he with pride. "My vacation's over. I'm leaving on Sunday to Poole". I sighed. I spent the entire night insomniac, with my head throbbing to the beat of his obliviously, peacefuly sleeping exhaling and inhaling speed. Close enough to feel the heat of his body, yet a million miles away, him dreaming and I reminiscing, both awaiting the dawn of a new day. Skipping the "thank you", "goodbye", hug or phone number, he says, "See you around maybe", holding a rather deceitfully seductive gaze. "Scott, we're never going to see each other again", I answer bluntly. Mirroring my sad smile in reply, minus the sadness, he left promptly.
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Nov 24, 2012 at 3:05 PM UTC
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