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She asked me If I had ever been In love Then I Realized that I Had never not been In love I realized I wanted Nothing Other than love I think there is Only one Off-ramp From the journey Of love That off-ramp Is judgment A critical heart Combined with A critical eye Fills one with The opposite Of love—judgment Judgment colors The mind with Negativity Until the sin of Judgment Is displaced By a lust For love, One will not find peace When love invades One’s heart The body finds peace When love is abundant And bountiful There is no fear Of wasting love Nor spilling love For love can grow Anywhere So am I In love? Yes, I am In love Excessively Wastefully and Willingly
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May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025 at 8:31 PM UTC
Have I Ever Been in Love?
She asked me If I had ever been In love Then I Realized that I Had never not been In love I realized I wanted Nothing Other than love I think there is Only one Off-ramp From the journey Of love That off-ramp Is judgment A critical heart Combined with A critical eye Fills one with The opposite Of love—judgment Judgment colors The mind with Negativity Until the sin of Judgment Is displaced By a lust For love, One will not find peace When love invades One’s heart The body finds peace When love is abundant And bountiful There is no fear Of wasting love Nor spilling love For love can grow Anywhere So am I In love? Yes, I am In love Excessively Wastefully and Willingly
love, questions, judgment
william-a-poppen
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89/M/American
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025 at 8:31 PM UTC
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