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You came too soon, the four of you, into this world.  Your mother, recognising the feeling, did what she had to do to give birth to you, cleaned you, disposed of the afterbirth in nature's economical way. But you had no experience, no knowledge of how to be kittens. Almost still foetuses, furless, unmoving, cold, you did not stimulate her maternal instinct. She did not recognise you as her babies. Lying against her belly, you did not know how to suckle, and she, not ready to feed you, walked off. You had no future. A bucket of water, I thought, would speed your departure from the life you had barely started. But you, recognising the element you had so lately left, were at home in it, swam untroubled under the surface like tiny, pink sea creatures. Unwilling to watch longer, I gave you a quicker end. Your mother, unlike me, resumed her life as if nothing had changed.
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Jan 2, 2017
Jan 2, 2017 at 2:28 PM UTC
Drowning Kittens
You came too soon, the four of you, into this world.  Your mother, recognising the feeling, did what she had to do to give birth to you, cleaned you, disposed of the afterbirth in nature's economical way. But you had no experience, no knowledge of how to be kittens. Almost still foetuses, furless, unmoving, cold, you did not stimulate her maternal instinct. She did not recognise you as her babies. Lying against her belly, you did not know how to suckle, and she, not ready to feed you, walked off. You had no future. A bucket of water, I thought, would speed your departure from the life you had barely started. But you, recognising the element you had so lately left, were at home in it, swam untroubled under the surface like tiny, pink sea creatures. Unwilling to watch longer, I gave you a quicker end. Your mother, unlike me, resumed her life as if nothing had changed.
paul-hansford
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Jan 2, 2017
Jan 2, 2017 at 2:28 PM UTC
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