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hey, not bad kid. you been practicing that? learning all the tricks, figuring out the secrets, putting in the hours, working hard, doing what you live for? I can tell, and someday, they'll put your name up in the big flashing neon lights, you'll be a superstar, they'll all love you then, they'll watch you intently, gazes fixed and eyes widened. then you can show them all about your skill, your technique, more flawless than the thoughtless fingers of a master guitarist as they dance and flutter over the fretboard. because you-- you have ideas that nobody else has ever thought. you've got it down! you can make it float in the air like a leaf, wiggle like a worm wriggling in the mud, swim like a slow-motion-astronaut jumping on the moon, quiver and flip over like a struggling fish on the deck of a boat, spin like a top, even sprint across the finish line like a breathless runner. but none of that, kid, is worth **** unless you can make it sing. and i mean fly like a falcon, effortlessly though the air, soaring, beautiful, mesmerizing. you have to cram it all, every emotion, thought, every piece of piece of this puzzle that is existence, and jam into one note, one step, one jumpshot, one stroke of your magic paintbrush only you can use, and then, maybe, somebody will notice you. so keep trying kid; you never had a choice.
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Oct 11, 2011
Oct 11, 2011 at 4:57 PM UTC
making It
hey, not bad kid. you been practicing that? learning all the tricks, figuring out the secrets, putting in the hours, working hard, doing what you live for? I can tell, and someday, they'll put your name up in the big flashing neon lights, you'll be a superstar, they'll all love you then, they'll watch you intently, gazes fixed and eyes widened. then you can show them all about your skill, your technique, more flawless than the thoughtless fingers of a master guitarist as they dance and flutter over the fretboard. because you-- you have ideas that nobody else has ever thought. you've got it down! you can make it float in the air like a leaf, wiggle like a worm wriggling in the mud, swim like a slow-motion-astronaut jumping on the moon, quiver and flip over like a struggling fish on the deck of a boat, spin like a top, even sprint across the finish line like a breathless runner. but none of that, kid, is worth **** unless you can make it sing. and i mean fly like a falcon, effortlessly though the air, soaring, beautiful, mesmerizing. you have to cram it all, every emotion, thought, every piece of piece of this puzzle that is existence, and jam into one note, one step, one jumpshot, one stroke of your magic paintbrush only you can use, and then, maybe, somebody will notice you. so keep trying kid; you never had a choice.
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Oct 11, 2011
Oct 11, 2011 at 4:57 PM UTC
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