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i read that astronauts can tell from outer space which cities are newly built because electricians are making streetlights out of sodium vapor now as opposed to mercury, so now road outlines glow orange and newer cities tend to be more geometrically planned, all straight edges and such, while older cities are made up of frantic curves and corners and i wonder if i look to you like i have been worn and used, am i frenzied and dull, or am i new?  maybe my jagged lines have been sanded and smoothed maybe i still glow
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Apr 17, 2014
Apr 17, 2014 at 10:52 PM UTC
astronomy
i read that astronauts can tell from outer space which cities are newly built because electricians are making streetlights out of sodium vapor now as opposed to mercury, so now road outlines glow orange and newer cities tend to be more geometrically planned, all straight edges and such, while older cities are made up of frantic curves and corners and i wonder if i look to you like i have been worn and used, am i frenzied and dull, or am i new?  maybe my jagged lines have been sanded and smoothed maybe i still glow
this has been unfinished in my drafts for a while
marina-6
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Apr 17, 2014
Apr 17, 2014 at 10:52 PM UTC
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