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what you mean by your: metaphors; you make my heart beat louder than the footsteps of thousands of soldiers marching methodically. tone; audacious, yet wary, laudatory, and adoring. allusion; i know this girl who makes my heart race faster than Jesse Owens and she looks an awful lot like you. repetition; i love you, i'm in love with you, i love your pulse, i love, love, love me. hyperbole; i'd ****** everyone on earth just to get a taste of your lips. just tell me what you mean.
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Apr 5, 2014
Apr 5, 2014 at 1:54 AM UTC
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what you mean by your: metaphors; you make my heart beat louder than the footsteps of thousands of soldiers marching methodically. tone; audacious, yet wary, laudatory, and adoring. allusion; i know this girl who makes my heart race faster than Jesse Owens and she looks an awful lot like you. repetition; i love you, i'm in love with you, i love your pulse, i love, love, love me. hyperbole; i'd ****** everyone on earth just to get a taste of your lips. just tell me what you mean.
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Apr 5, 2014
Apr 5, 2014 at 1:54 AM UTC
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