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To the simple minded man This day would have been like the rest Would have been an overdone steak dinner Alone But he plays a broken bone remix Of ex-lover’s gritted teeth It is the click in his jaw over steak That reminds him of the gnashing He nurses a beer In between helpings But there’s always the click A painful metronome For past music When he was capable of lapping the language out of her mouth Days when he was all noise Like a hallway echo Or a fist through drywall Or a nightmare gasp But now all he needs is the cotton he eats To soak up the sound So he won’t have to listen to himself keep sayin’ There used to be this growl my gut made For your bitter music When we choreographed a collision Of bone And breath And teeth that touched when I still thought I wasn’t pressing hard enough The masticating click Reminds him of her smile It hurts his jaw And his memory But he continues making her painful sound Like it might actually bring her back And it does a little Just for today And tomorrow? Tomorrow is too far away
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Apr 1, 2012
Apr 1, 2012 at 5:55 AM UTC
This Day Reminds Him (FLP)
To the simple minded man This day would have been like the rest Would have been an overdone steak dinner Alone But he plays a broken bone remix Of ex-lover’s gritted teeth It is the click in his jaw over steak That reminds him of the gnashing He nurses a beer In between helpings But there’s always the click A painful metronome For past music When he was capable of lapping the language out of her mouth Days when he was all noise Like a hallway echo Or a fist through drywall Or a nightmare gasp But now all he needs is the cotton he eats To soak up the sound So he won’t have to listen to himself keep sayin’ There used to be this growl my gut made For your bitter music When we choreographed a collision Of bone And breath And teeth that touched when I still thought I wasn’t pressing hard enough The masticating click Reminds him of her smile It hurts his jaw And his memory But he continues making her painful sound Like it might actually bring her back And it does a little Just for today And tomorrow? Tomorrow is too far away
First lines donated by Rafael Manrique. It is national poetry writing month. That means 1 poem a day for the entire month. I am going to try and make as many as I can First Line, or thanks to lp, Last Line poems. Wish me luck! If you wanna try, check out http://www.napowrimo.net/
jon-tobias
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Apr 1, 2012
Apr 1, 2012 at 5:55 AM UTC
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