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a woman stood with silver hair laugh lines had long set in a kind smile she gives to me a lifelong tail she spins of mr right and mr wrong of love and of deceit of all the wemen excluding her her man swept off their feet she tells me of her children and the hard times that they shared the laughter thats between them and the burdens that they bear she reminisced of good old times a smile apon her face she told me not a single momment ever i should waste she told me that its crazy how quickly time flies how so often if she could shed trade time for being wize she told me id be ok in this world of mine if i could only find someone to share it by my side i told her i had found the one she didnt seem surprised for at 18 she too was to be a bride so were alike in many ways young love was hers and mine im glad to let her relive this at least one more time
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Oct 12, 2012
Oct 12, 2012 at 12:17 AM UTC
Young love
a woman stood with silver hair laugh lines had long set in a kind smile she gives to me a lifelong tail she spins of mr right and mr wrong of love and of deceit of all the wemen excluding her her man swept off their feet she tells me of her children and the hard times that they shared the laughter thats between them and the burdens that they bear she reminisced of good old times a smile apon her face she told me not a single momment ever i should waste she told me that its crazy how quickly time flies how so often if she could shed trade time for being wize she told me id be ok in this world of mine if i could only find someone to share it by my side i told her i had found the one she didnt seem surprised for at 18 she too was to be a bride so were alike in many ways young love was hers and mine im glad to let her relive this at least one more time
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Oct 12, 2012
Oct 12, 2012 at 12:17 AM UTC
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