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I saw a lust in her pauses Before she spoke Weakened stops Where she seemingly thought Of which words to let go As she stroked my ego From her pro perspective Her clues to give As I elected for another drink Her street smarts Met by only her intellect Her wits intersecting The infectious reflections Of the world we knew On the brink of a kiss Our faces Increasingly grew powerless In the shared haze Of conversation Tethering our connection Nothing could stop us As i slowly caved And laid my hand On top of hers No longer hearing A single word Our eyes lazily locked Blurring the exterior Field of view As it attempted to Press through With flashing lights Electronic riffs And melodic drums Strummed From the ambiance Of the room A love was groomed And it grew We just knew Exactly what Was what Inching closer and closer The force between us Had proven to be too much As we stood up And walked to her car I grabbed her waist And lifted her to the trunk Where we kissed And we kissed As the world slowly sunk Around us In breath-less-ness Then Suddenly this Feeling of pressure Presses on my side She had stabbed me Then kicked me back In my surprise Then I was hit from behind With a flash light Cracking my head In flashing colors And regrets I hit the ground To a parade of feet Two men kicked and stomped on me As my blood was spilling Into the street Firing nine times i rose to my feet Slowly walking over my victories One was limp The other convulsing As the girl was crawling On her hands and knees Away from me And toward a tree She cried "please" And "I'm sorry" Over and over again As I kicked her Onto her back Whimpering And pleading She raised her hands And squeezed Her eyes shut "Love is not enough" And with a flashing thump I slumped away to my cave Wounded in multiple ways Reflecting on the mistakes i made As i turned back toward the scene Depraved Of proper release I returned to see Investigators and yellow tape Draping the stage of her fate As she stared back at me From the tree Still possessing A beauty that was Beyond me A beauty That only I could see And it Sparkled From her peace She wanted me And got me And under the shadow Of that tree She looked as though A pixie in the hand Of a king
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Mar 4, 2013
Mar 4, 2013 at 7:34 PM UTC
{ Thorned Rings }
I saw a lust in her pauses Before she spoke Weakened stops Where she seemingly thought Of which words to let go As she stroked my ego From her pro perspective Her clues to give As I elected for another drink Her street smarts Met by only her intellect Her wits intersecting The infectious reflections Of the world we knew On the brink of a kiss Our faces Increasingly grew powerless In the shared haze Of conversation Tethering our connection Nothing could stop us As i slowly caved And laid my hand On top of hers No longer hearing A single word Our eyes lazily locked Blurring the exterior Field of view As it attempted to Press through With flashing lights Electronic riffs And melodic drums Strummed From the ambiance Of the room A love was groomed And it grew We just knew Exactly what Was what Inching closer and closer The force between us Had proven to be too much As we stood up And walked to her car I grabbed her waist And lifted her to the trunk Where we kissed And we kissed As the world slowly sunk Around us In breath-less-ness Then Suddenly this Feeling of pressure Presses on my side She had stabbed me Then kicked me back In my surprise Then I was hit from behind With a flash light Cracking my head In flashing colors And regrets I hit the ground To a parade of feet Two men kicked and stomped on me As my blood was spilling Into the street Firing nine times i rose to my feet Slowly walking over my victories One was limp The other convulsing As the girl was crawling On her hands and knees Away from me And toward a tree She cried "please" And "I'm sorry" Over and over again As I kicked her Onto her back Whimpering And pleading She raised her hands And squeezed Her eyes shut "Love is not enough" And with a flashing thump I slumped away to my cave Wounded in multiple ways Reflecting on the mistakes i made As i turned back toward the scene Depraved Of proper release I returned to see Investigators and yellow tape Draping the stage of her fate As she stared back at me From the tree Still possessing A beauty that was Beyond me A beauty That only I could see And it Sparkled From her peace She wanted me And got me And under the shadow Of that tree She looked as though A pixie in the hand Of a king
pending another rewrite, as per all my work really.
Mikhael
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Mar 4, 2013
Mar 4, 2013 at 7:34 PM UTC
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