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"You really loved him, Didn't you?" My perfectly pink lips quiver As hot tears brim my eyes. I nod my head yes; Of course I did. But I loved him much more Than just a nod. He was a deep breath Of fresh air, A shooting star Across a jet black sky, The split second silence Under a highway bridge In the pouring rain. But I could only nod. "Smile, darling. You have so much ahead of you." But once again, I could Muster only a nod. A disbelieving nod, But a nod just the same.
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May 13, 2013
May 13, 2013 at 9:59 AM UTC
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"You really loved him, Didn't you?" My perfectly pink lips quiver As hot tears brim my eyes. I nod my head yes; Of course I did. But I loved him much more Than just a nod. He was a deep breath Of fresh air, A shooting star Across a jet black sky, The split second silence Under a highway bridge In the pouring rain. But I could only nod. "Smile, darling. You have so much ahead of you." But once again, I could Muster only a nod. A disbelieving nod, But a nod just the same.
This is pathetically cliche, but it had to be done. Also, when you type "nod" six times in a poem this short, it starts to look like it isn't a word at all. . .
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27/F/English
May 13, 2013
May 13, 2013 at 9:59 AM UTC
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