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Awakening slowly in morning shadows, Céline senses what might now ripen and grow within her. The earth is ringing out. By obscure transitions, affirming visions in the girl’s self-determining mind are revealing new depths to her evolving character. The nameless hour has arrived, that mesmerizing, eternal hour, when children cease to look vaguely at the sky. What was previously dreaming confusedly in her eyes now takes on a more determined glint; her resolute grin also declares it. While still half asleep, a single delightful odour communicates itself, returning the nine-year-old to an autumn lived long ago. Unaware that the Madeleine returned Proust to his childhood, she suspects memories will awaken and breathe when odours are good. The bitter, sticky fragrance of rice cakes cooking on the breakfast fire has returned Céline to her to grandmother’s kitchen. She shakes herself awake, blaming the sweet odour on a dream, but she has bounced off the intimate memory of grandmother’s cakes. Her sense of it is sleepy, but she’s aware that this odour is beginning to introduce her to visions of a life she has not yet lived. Then, unaccountably, a series of echoing sounds accompany the scented reverie and her potential universe unravels further. It’s no vague hint; it will sleep in her heart forever, or until she is rocking her worn, old body in a warm rocking chair. Attuned to the fountain’s sweet harmony, she imagines the multi-layered sounds are multiplying with endless new variations. The gathering vision washes over her in soothing waves of strange calm, mixing a taste of knowledge with hints of mirth. She discovers these sounds to be edible and having feasted on her memories, she now lifts her head to facilitate her feeding on the future. She can smell all there is to know roasting in the sky. No words come but she vocalises the amiable sounds. Breathing rhythmically, it is no surprise to her that life can be sensitised in this fashion; she has played reverie like this before. Céline knows how to curl away, go deep within, sing in her head and rejoice in opportunities of solitude. She bids her sleep-filled body to stir, re-affirm who she is and discover what the welcoming sounds have in store. No answer comes, but fortified and grateful for the magical reveries she surrenders to a forest that will be wild beyond her knowing. Drinking in the dawn like a cup of spring water, she prepares to enter the heart of this forest by vowing to stay close to her heart.
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Feb 10, 2018
Feb 10, 2018 at 8:11 AM UTC
When memory breathes
Awakening slowly in morning shadows, Céline senses what might now ripen and grow within her. The earth is ringing out. By obscure transitions, affirming visions in the girl’s self-determining mind are revealing new depths to her evolving character. The nameless hour has arrived, that mesmerizing, eternal hour, when children cease to look vaguely at the sky. What was previously dreaming confusedly in her eyes now takes on a more determined glint; her resolute grin also declares it. While still half asleep, a single delightful odour communicates itself, returning the nine-year-old to an autumn lived long ago. Unaware that the Madeleine returned Proust to his childhood, she suspects memories will awaken and breathe when odours are good. The bitter, sticky fragrance of rice cakes cooking on the breakfast fire has returned Céline to her to grandmother’s kitchen. She shakes herself awake, blaming the sweet odour on a dream, but she has bounced off the intimate memory of grandmother’s cakes. Her sense of it is sleepy, but she’s aware that this odour is beginning to introduce her to visions of a life she has not yet lived. Then, unaccountably, a series of echoing sounds accompany the scented reverie and her potential universe unravels further. It’s no vague hint; it will sleep in her heart forever, or until she is rocking her worn, old body in a warm rocking chair. Attuned to the fountain’s sweet harmony, she imagines the multi-layered sounds are multiplying with endless new variations. The gathering vision washes over her in soothing waves of strange calm, mixing a taste of knowledge with hints of mirth. She discovers these sounds to be edible and having feasted on her memories, she now lifts her head to facilitate her feeding on the future. She can smell all there is to know roasting in the sky. No words come but she vocalises the amiable sounds. Breathing rhythmically, it is no surprise to her that life can be sensitised in this fashion; she has played reverie like this before. Céline knows how to curl away, go deep within, sing in her head and rejoice in opportunities of solitude. She bids her sleep-filled body to stir, re-affirm who she is and discover what the welcoming sounds have in store. No answer comes, but fortified and grateful for the magical reveries she surrenders to a forest that will be wild beyond her knowing. Drinking in the dawn like a cup of spring water, she prepares to enter the heart of this forest by vowing to stay close to her heart.
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Feb 10, 2018
Feb 10, 2018 at 8:11 AM UTC
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