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You see that bridge that stretches over the highway? You remember that feeling, that rush when we stood on it Together, hands locked tight, fingers caressing each Others knuckles softly? Our toes laughed at the roaring air, ready to soar Away with it, flying into the air like a bird. Your hair was like a golden hurricane, whipping Around your pale, nervous face feverishly. Your hand was starting to shake, And your breath came out in tiny, delicate Gasps that were stolen by the wind around Us. The cars rushed beneath us, like the gnashing teeth Of some beast, a machine. The people with their Busy lives never glanced up to See two teenage girls wavering on the edge of Life and death. They would notice when our brains were on their Windshield, and your beautiful storm of hair hung Damp and limp, stained with scarlet and tears. I stared at you silently, and it hurt me to See you cry. I wanted to lean over and Kiss your tears away, Balancing precariously on the edge of the bridge, Your uncertain and pained breath on my cheeks. We stared as the cars raced by, each one a separate Life speeding away; a drunken man whose wife couldn’t Take him, a young college girl who was on the road to Success, and the middle aged woman who fretted Over her marriage. Each a life that we couldn’t touch No matter how hard we tried, or how far we Reached. Your foot slipped at that moment, and Your breath caught as you yelped a little, A scream dying in your throat As you realized you were still safe, your hand Gripping mine tightly, a promise to Never let go, to fall and burn together. I looked at you again, my chin held high and My eyes burning brightly, and I stared Into your glittering eyes, Those green eyes that looked like the Morning grass with when it cried with The sparkling dew of the rising sun, And you looked back at me, fearful and Reluctant. I could hear your heart beating, slamming against Your chest, the blood pouring through your Veins like sand slipping through fingers, thick and Fast. You turned away, and your hand loosened, Fingers reaching for mine before Slowly falling away. You leaned forward over the edge and I let My hand drop to my side. Fall, fall, fall. Your mouth gaped open, And yet no voice pierced through the loud And noisy highway, the screaming of Cars and people not stopping to take notice of the World they shoved through. You closed your eyes as the first person looked up and Stared. The wind slowed and the air thickened, and I felt your hand in mine Once more.
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Jun 13, 2012
Jun 13, 2012 at 2:06 AM UTC
Girl on the Bridge
You see that bridge that stretches over the highway? You remember that feeling, that rush when we stood on it Together, hands locked tight, fingers caressing each Others knuckles softly? Our toes laughed at the roaring air, ready to soar Away with it, flying into the air like a bird. Your hair was like a golden hurricane, whipping Around your pale, nervous face feverishly. Your hand was starting to shake, And your breath came out in tiny, delicate Gasps that were stolen by the wind around Us. The cars rushed beneath us, like the gnashing teeth Of some beast, a machine. The people with their Busy lives never glanced up to See two teenage girls wavering on the edge of Life and death. They would notice when our brains were on their Windshield, and your beautiful storm of hair hung Damp and limp, stained with scarlet and tears. I stared at you silently, and it hurt me to See you cry. I wanted to lean over and Kiss your tears away, Balancing precariously on the edge of the bridge, Your uncertain and pained breath on my cheeks. We stared as the cars raced by, each one a separate Life speeding away; a drunken man whose wife couldn’t Take him, a young college girl who was on the road to Success, and the middle aged woman who fretted Over her marriage. Each a life that we couldn’t touch No matter how hard we tried, or how far we Reached. Your foot slipped at that moment, and Your breath caught as you yelped a little, A scream dying in your throat As you realized you were still safe, your hand Gripping mine tightly, a promise to Never let go, to fall and burn together. I looked at you again, my chin held high and My eyes burning brightly, and I stared Into your glittering eyes, Those green eyes that looked like the Morning grass with when it cried with The sparkling dew of the rising sun, And you looked back at me, fearful and Reluctant. I could hear your heart beating, slamming against Your chest, the blood pouring through your Veins like sand slipping through fingers, thick and Fast. You turned away, and your hand loosened, Fingers reaching for mine before Slowly falling away. You leaned forward over the edge and I let My hand drop to my side. Fall, fall, fall. Your mouth gaped open, And yet no voice pierced through the loud And noisy highway, the screaming of Cars and people not stopping to take notice of the World they shoved through. You closed your eyes as the first person looked up and Stared. The wind slowed and the air thickened, and I felt your hand in mine Once more.
I'm horrible at this kind of thing. It would have been mediocre as prose, but I knew it would be beautiful as poetry, and yet... It's still more like prose.
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Jun 13, 2012
Jun 13, 2012 at 2:06 AM UTC
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