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Sweet breath of mountain, Breathing in slumberous calm Controlling my mind with the deep smells Of each pine needle, crushed under foot. Sending up my senses the memories of mountains Buried where past breezes blow. Taking my breath with each step, Sleep over rock, taxing my lungs Drinking yet deeper the mountains persuasion. Knife sharp glints of sun Slip between bough and branch Casting fractured lights and dark, dancing Shadows at mid-day. The mountains small creatures attract The quick glance.  Calm watchers see Soft green lizards, tiny bugs, Slowing only, to look at me. Cold waters split the mountains skin Ever running downward, ripple over rocks And fallen cones.  Falling to crescendo In a white cascade, searching a path to the sea. Take me sweet mountain, let me stand As a tree on your side.  Let me be nurtured from inside you That I may grace you humbly, and that you, might grace, me.
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Feb 9, 2012
Feb 9, 2012 at 10:07 AM UTC
Sweet Mountain
Sweet breath of mountain, Breathing in slumberous calm Controlling my mind with the deep smells Of each pine needle, crushed under foot. Sending up my senses the memories of mountains Buried where past breezes blow. Taking my breath with each step, Sleep over rock, taxing my lungs Drinking yet deeper the mountains persuasion. Knife sharp glints of sun Slip between bough and branch Casting fractured lights and dark, dancing Shadows at mid-day. The mountains small creatures attract The quick glance.  Calm watchers see Soft green lizards, tiny bugs, Slowing only, to look at me. Cold waters split the mountains skin Ever running downward, ripple over rocks And fallen cones.  Falling to crescendo In a white cascade, searching a path to the sea. Take me sweet mountain, let me stand As a tree on your side.  Let me be nurtured from inside you That I may grace you humbly, and that you, might grace, me.
ralph-e-peck
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60/M/American
Feb 9, 2012
Feb 9, 2012 at 10:07 AM UTC
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