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The room was ineffably dark, The silence was deafening, It was safe to say that I was utterly alone.. I walked, And walked, Until I could walk no longer. I was searching Searching for something that I don't know. It was still dark It was still silent I was still alone. It made no sense to continue any longer. So I stopped. And I waited, Until waiting made no more sense. And then He came.. First a glimmer, And then a beam, And then the room lit up, Both suddenly and slowly. He offered His hand and I took it. Relief came unannounced. The darkness, The chasing, The waiting, And ultimately the surrender-- They all made sense. Indeed, There is beauty in surrender.
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Nov 21, 2018
Nov 21, 2018 at 7:21 AM UTC
It All Made Sense
The room was ineffably dark, The silence was deafening, It was safe to say that I was utterly alone.. I walked, And walked, Until I could walk no longer. I was searching Searching for something that I don't know. It was still dark It was still silent I was still alone. It made no sense to continue any longer. So I stopped. And I waited, Until waiting made no more sense. And then He came.. First a glimmer, And then a beam, And then the room lit up, Both suddenly and slowly. He offered His hand and I took it. Relief came unannounced. The darkness, The chasing, The waiting, And ultimately the surrender-- They all made sense. Indeed, There is beauty in surrender.
blessrnsenora
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25/F/PH JP
Nov 21, 2018
Nov 21, 2018 at 7:21 AM UTC
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