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**or how very ******* rude!** your unintentionally agressive, shining glare reflects on all the silverware and china and crystal and it's the                        last                                   drop. i say, but enough about that let's talk about the fact that you're really ******* distracting* (see, i can't even finish my tea!) you are neon and flashing, police car lights a warning: blinding, seizure and discomfort inducing and tacky *but oh so ******* beautiful* (in the wrong way i suppose laugh)                        can't you see the commotion you cause? always ******* parading like it's something to be proud of like you don't care like you don't know like you don't even ******* notice your appeal is offensive and disgustingly disconcerting and impolite                        [ sometimes i wonder if you even own a ******* mirror                        and if you did,                        would you, [upon                        gazing at yourself staring                        like it's just the thing to ******* do,]                        would you *****                        (like i want to)                        on the floor                        on the food                        on your new shoes ] sigh look can you just go be you somewhere else,                        please                        ? you're making me sick to my stomach and i                   can't                                    breathe cough i'm sorry, it's just the bile isn't helping my sore throat.
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Jan 2, 2012
Jan 2, 2012 at 10:31 PM UTC
pretty disgusting
**or how very ******* rude!** your unintentionally agressive, shining glare reflects on all the silverware and china and crystal and it's the                        last                                   drop. i say, but enough about that let's talk about the fact that you're really ******* distracting* (see, i can't even finish my tea!) you are neon and flashing, police car lights a warning: blinding, seizure and discomfort inducing and tacky *but oh so ******* beautiful* (in the wrong way i suppose laugh)                        can't you see the commotion you cause? always ******* parading like it's something to be proud of like you don't care like you don't know like you don't even ******* notice your appeal is offensive and disgustingly disconcerting and impolite                        [ sometimes i wonder if you even own a ******* mirror                        and if you did,                        would you, [upon                        gazing at yourself staring                        like it's just the thing to ******* do,]                        would you *****                        (like i want to)                        on the floor                        on the food                        on your new shoes ] sigh look can you just go be you somewhere else,                        please                        ? you're making me sick to my stomach and i                   can't                                    breathe cough i'm sorry, it's just the bile isn't helping my sore throat.
it's all your fault. would you like some more biscuits? also, this is the longest thing i have ever written.
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Jan 2, 2012
Jan 2, 2012 at 10:31 PM UTC
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