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What names shall we give our children when we get older? Judy asked as we walked through the woods behind the house towards the lake (as she called the pond in the woods) I’m no good with names I said you must have some idea what names to call your children I haven't got children not yet but when we're older you will she said the trees were coming into leaf the sun was straight overhead birds were flying from branch to branch what if it's a girl? she asked I thought about the middle spread picture of the sports car in the Eagle comic I’d just pinned to my bedroom wall the parts number and labelled colourful surely you must have a girl's name? she asked Leonore I said what kind of name is that? she said I think it's in that Beethoven opera Miss Graham made us listen to during lessons I said I don't like it Judy said the car picture was just one of many I had on my bedroom walls I had one photograph of Hayley Mills in a frame by my bed I got it from a magazine on move-stars what about Ruth? she said or Rebecca? the path through the woods was windy there were bramble on each side how about Jezebel I said it has a certain ring to it don't like it she said gives off a bad scene we reached the fence around the lake and climbed over she had on that peasant looking dress flowered red and yellow I caught a glimpse of thigh as she went over you're not taking it seriously she said as we walked down the grass towards the water sure I am I said I think Judy’s a fine name for a daughter.
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Apr 20, 2014
Apr 20, 2014 at 3:06 AM UTC
WHAT'S IN A NAME.
What names shall we give our children when we get older? Judy asked as we walked through the woods behind the house towards the lake (as she called the pond in the woods) I’m no good with names I said you must have some idea what names to call your children I haven't got children not yet but when we're older you will she said the trees were coming into leaf the sun was straight overhead birds were flying from branch to branch what if it's a girl? she asked I thought about the middle spread picture of the sports car in the Eagle comic I’d just pinned to my bedroom wall the parts number and labelled colourful surely you must have a girl's name? she asked Leonore I said what kind of name is that? she said I think it's in that Beethoven opera Miss Graham made us listen to during lessons I said I don't like it Judy said the car picture was just one of many I had on my bedroom walls I had one photograph of Hayley Mills in a frame by my bed I got it from a magazine on move-stars what about Ruth? she said or Rebecca? the path through the woods was windy there were bramble on each side how about Jezebel I said it has a certain ring to it don't like it she said gives off a bad scene we reached the fence around the lake and climbed over she had on that peasant looking dress flowered red and yellow I caught a glimpse of thigh as she went over you're not taking it seriously she said as we walked down the grass towards the water sure I am I said I think Judy’s a fine name for a daughter.
terry-collett
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Apr 20, 2014
Apr 20, 2014 at 3:06 AM UTC
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