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I told myself I’m going to pull myself together and swim until I reach the surface. But it’s been six months since then and I’m still stuck in this water. I drowned, and under the surface I could see the midnight sun’s glowing halo. “Grab hold of it”, I said. But no matter what I do, I couldn't. I’m stuck in this same place. There’s dark water everywhere and the sun never rises. I feel like I’d been thrown overboard. But in reality, I jumped into the water. I said, **** it, I’m done.” I left behind the warship I was on.
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Sep 16, 2014
Sep 16, 2014 at 9:39 AM UTC
My warship.
I told myself I’m going to pull myself together and swim until I reach the surface. But it’s been six months since then and I’m still stuck in this water. I drowned, and under the surface I could see the midnight sun’s glowing halo. “Grab hold of it”, I said. But no matter what I do, I couldn't. I’m stuck in this same place. There’s dark water everywhere and the sun never rises. I feel like I’d been thrown overboard. But in reality, I jumped into the water. I said, **** it, I’m done.” I left behind the warship I was on.
rachanne
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Sep 16, 2014
Sep 16, 2014 at 9:39 AM UTC
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