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“Death is nothing to us, for when it is, we are not, and when we are, it is not” is a simple argument which boxes in sad fears, staving off the luscious draw of material acquisition and its frenemy clinical depression; it’s Seneca who promised to open his veins in a warm bath, and did just that because the emperor ordered him thus and we know what ******* Socrates did curing himself of life like a disease equating obedience with justice but my will is strong even as madness swirls, I’ll oblige no hemlock nor razor
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Aug 4, 2021
Aug 4, 2021 at 11:43 AM UTC
Sonnet XVI
“Death is nothing to us, for when it is, we are not, and when we are, it is not” is a simple argument which boxes in sad fears, staving off the luscious draw of material acquisition and its frenemy clinical depression; it’s Seneca who promised to open his veins in a warm bath, and did just that because the emperor ordered him thus and we know what ******* Socrates did curing himself of life like a disease equating obedience with justice but my will is strong even as madness swirls, I’ll oblige no hemlock nor razor
I don’t like this sonnet. I’ve been out of practice and haven’t written anything in a long time. I was trying to express a sense of mental fortitude in the face of adversity that I get from having studied philosophy, but the tone is kind of depressing. Posting it anyway.
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Aug 4, 2021
Aug 4, 2021 at 11:43 AM UTC
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